YakovlevArt's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[DJ-T] The Hunt]

You'll notice your score is lower...

I'm sorry for it.
This track is more or less experimental.
I really can't tell where it's going or what it's trying to be. It starts off slow, so I'm thinking this is dubstep w/ an electronic twist. Then it picks up, but within that there are some production flaws.
-I like the chip-tune effect, but the main melody (along with the kick) is quiet. Then the drums pick up, but at this point they are just overpowering it by sheer volume, causing compression.
I'm guessing the heart of the track is at 4:19? There it sounds pretty nice, i like fading in and out. The melody id also simple, but groove-able=]
Overall this track just seems like you made a simple beat, then preceded to play around, with effects and automations.
I can see how some people would ike this kind of thing, but I'm not completely convinced you made it this way on purpose.
So...I hope this review helps with your future track productions =]

3/5
7/10

Yeil responds:

Thank you for an honest review!
Yes, this song was one of my first that I used to experiment and learn with, I had thought that I turned it into something decent. It's difficult to tell when creating music because you listen to the same thing over and over, which is why I uploaded it here; hoping to get honest reviews like yours!
I will eventually try to rework this into a better song, thanks again!

[(CHS) Burden Of A Secret...]

Has a noce tone.

I like it, it sounds pretty ambient to me. I don't understand why it has such a low score.
5/5
9/10
Good job.

ChaosDragon004 responds:

Yeah, no big deal that just the normal zero bombing process lol. It's a little early for them to start though, because normally happens around the start of the week. Odd... Thanks for your thoughts bro.

[Quien se ha robado el color?]

Very relaxing...

perfect summer music.
Great job!

[Lifting Aura]

This track so so much potential!

It i really nice, i mean it many not be the best in production and mastering, but boy does it creat a mood, does it create an atosphere. I think that is what makes this track so good, also what many tracks now are missing!
Dude, the pads are so deep and mystifying. I would say one fix is in need, it's the kick!
I know you said your impatient, but thats no excuse. You must show that you do care =[ Or else nobody will want to "help you out" if you don't want to help yourself out.
I think you could replace the drums with a bit less bassier kicks, It would not make it so loud at the parts when they are playing.

I would love to do a remix of this track, could I?

DetiousMusic responds:

Thanks! Yeah I have a lot of trouble creating the prefect basses and kicks. It's not my speciality. Haha.
Remix? No.
I'm kidding. Go for it. (:
Thanks for the review.

[Fuckin Evil Psytrance]

4 from me.

Your taking a big risk uploading something like this on a website like this.
I give you respect for that.
This track is very good. The mastering is nice, so are all the synths and basslines.
i can tell you put a lot of effort into this track. all the little sounds effects, percussion's, and synths are amazing, how you made them on your own! Loving it, you did a great job. Sounds exactly like Psy-Trance.
4/5
10/10
I'm going to download it. Keep up the great work =]

I used to listen to Infected Mushrooms all the time, this is so good, it reminds me of the days i liked Psy-trance.
Thanks for uploading!

[Day'n Nite vs Sexy Chick]

Haha i use both programs.

I really like the idea. On their own they are both great songs and remixes. the only problem id the vocals, them overlap too often causing it to sound very messy and disoriented. Try just mixing it by using an acapella from one and the instrumentals of another.

[Dan Roth - Breathe]

you are quite the expert

in house music.

I give you props on making this track a whopping 7 mins and the track itself not losing structure. Good job I'd say.

Though this song is good, its not perfect, and isn't the point of a review to point out those mistakes?
You have interesting intro and outro, though i feel as if there is no breakdown to introduce the melody.
The main synth you used does not make me feel too comfortable, the hypersaw or whatever you used is too high and too much. try using a sound that is less upfront. By that i mean a softer sample, or just move the piano roll down a few tones so its not so high.

Overall: rework the melody, to me it sounds weird.

the drums and claps are wonderful.
8/10
5/5

iheartsonyheadphones responds:

Thanks for such criticism! Now that I listen back, I fully accept there are minor faults with this track and agree with overall everything you've stated. Although the only thingi disagree with is the melody sounding wierd, because thats down to personal opinion :3

Thank you very much for your words, and thank you even more for the 5/5!
If you enjoyed the track, that's all I'm worried about <3

So thankyou again for your support and help, it means a lot!

Your friend,
Dan Roth <3

[I Don't Like It (Electro Prvw)]

Loving it!

This track sounds very catchy and good.
I like the simplicity of it, how you use effects and mods to create variety.
Very nice mastering. This track really sounds professional.
Good job. Thanks for the awesome track to download for free.

-Keep up the great producing =]

[final destination remix part 1]

Sound sick!

it is noice hardstyle i really like the mastering.
The only thing i dont like is the 1st kick and its kinda short =[
other than that the melody sounds nice and its true hardstyle, unlike most kids on NG

-Good job!

pyogerjumper responds:

thanks i know its kinda short check back and ill ahve some new hardstyle songs
so you can tell me if u like them or not

[Get your Growler out!]

Good, so far.

I like the rhythm and the tone of this track. The drums are clean but heavy-like it.
I'm loving the bass/reese as well. My only and major critique is to go into the bass of this project.''
By that i mean, bring the frequency of the bass down, it is too loud. Im not sure if your using headphones to make the bass or not, but its pretty loud on my sub-woofer.
Just use a parametric or something to bring down the bass, but leave the deep bass. I mean you have a reese so all you would need it a sub bass.